fractured fariy tale

 WALT write a fractured fairy tale

WALT us other words instead of said

I will write my own fairy tale based on a classic fairy tale

I will change the characters,setting 

I will use other words instead of said

Once upon time the three little green dogs  lived in  an old little house together.  One sunny morning a man came from a rich workplace. He replied  that they have a lot of money so they screamed  “yeah we are rich “.  Then the next day they went to look for big houses.   The big bad wolf  was reading the newspaper when he read that the three little green dogs were rich. Then the wolf whispered to himself “I’ve  got a plan” so he found the three little green dog’s houses.

 He went to the first house and he knocked on the door. Bang! bang! bang! 

“Who is it?'' she replied.  The wolf yelled  “open the door”. The little green dog didn’t answer. So he went crashing through the door and landed on the chair.  He looked at the first little green dog and excitedly asked  “will you marry me” no “she screamed “get out”!

The wolf  never gave up. He went to the second  house then he spoke to the other green dog “will you marry me please!” but she replied  “no! out now”!. 

He went to the third house. He went through  the door and ran to the bed room and  the big bad wolf asked her
“Will you marry me”? She yelled  yes”!

Then the big bad wolf replied ``stop” then he grabbed the green dog and took it. She went  to the train with the wolf   then she tried to talk to him but he still replied stop”. When they got home someone mumbled “help please “then she laughed and told him “see, you should have listened when I wanted to speak. Someone else lives here too”! The big bad wolf ended up leaving because no one was talking to him and he felt left out